Financial Institution Content Rewrites
Financial Institution Content Rewrites
Content editing interview exercise
The following illustrates my ability to proof, edit, and rewrite existing content to fix errors and make it more concise.
Original: If you cannot afford to make your mortgage payments, you could face the loss of your home. Once you miss 3 consecutive payments, the lender, or your bank, could begin the process to take possession of your property. So, if you think you are going to miss your mortgage payments, discuss this matter with your lender to see whether a plan can be made to prevent your defaulting on the property and losing the property. Try to find ways to bring your mortgage account into good standing. Speak with your mortgage advisor to ensure all possible financial resources have been explored to prevent the loss of your home. Call us at <PHONE>.
Revised: Your lender or bank may take possession of your property if you miss three consecutive payments. If you expect to miss any mortgage payments, plan with your lender to avoid defaulting. Prevent losing your home and keep your mortgage account in good standing. Call your mortgage advisor at <PHONE> to explore your financial options.
Original: If you think you are going to miss a mortgage payment, let your lender know as soon as possible. They will work with you to make a plan on how you can make up the missed payment. If you don’t make arrangements with the lender, your mortgage goes into default. Once you’ve missed three payments in a row, the lender is in a position to begin the process of taking possession of your property.
Revised: Contact your lender immediately if you expect to miss a mortgage payment. They can proceed to possess your property if you miss three mortgage payments in a row. Work with your lender to plan how to make up a missed payment before your mortgage defaults.
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Revised: Maximize your online security by protecting yourself from fraud and identity theft. Learn how our security tools and safe computing practices can help.